Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login

Sleeping Beauty
Chapter Six
Following the voices you heard coming from the front door, you paused just out of sight to try and see who was at Oliver’s door.
Your gaze fell on a young man, slightly taller than your crasy host and just as frighteningly mysterious. He looked nearly identical to America. His auburn hair had a cowlick in the same place, the frames for his shades were the same size and shape of America’s for his glasses. He was even wearing a bomber jacket… of sorts. All of him- his clothing, his skin- was darker than the real America.
“Do what do I owe this pleasure?” Oliver was saying, bouncing on the balls of his feet like a child.
“I think we need to change our terms of agreement, Oliver.” The man was saying irritably, crossing his arms and leaning against the doorframe. “I don’t see why we need to hold off at all. We should have killed the girls in the building.”
“Oh dear, Al, what’s the fun in that? Kill them right off, how heartless.” Oliver was giggling, though you personally didn’t find anything you were hearing to be amusing. White-faced, you slunk down to the floor with trembling knees. Kill you? Which girls? You hated to think that anybody else was in danger as well. “Besides, I thought you liked the idea of spending some time alone with the young lady~!”
“Ugh…” Al noisily sighed from the doorway, moving his dark frames up to rest on his head, revealing red irises. “That part’s what I mean. Your target was what, Japan’s?”
“Russia’s” Oliver corrected, giggling again. “Why do you ask?”
“You wouldn’t get it then. I got the Italian.” He spat the word like the thought made him sick. “She still hasn’t shut up. The least she could do is calm down enough for me to do something worth all the crying about! It’s revolting. It would have been more fun killing her quickly and painfully in front of the nations.” Al had a disgusted look on his face, glaring at Oliver as he continued smiling at him. “You laugh now, but you wouldn’t last a day. I say we trade, see what you think then.”
“No, oh no Al…” Oliver shook his pointer finger in Al’s face, grinning broadly. “That would break the rules! I couldn’t do that~!”
Looking more irritated than ever, Al opened his mouth as though to argue his point further, only to pause with an odd look on his face. Turning slowly to glance back out of the doorway where he still stood, he frowned out into the yard, as though looking for something. He started to move away from the house, clearly distracted by something.
“Well, if that’s all, I’ll let you go now.” Oliver spoke as he closed the door in one unhurried movement. “Have fun!”
As the door clicked closed, you jolted out of your shocked trance and swallowed hard, backing away across the floor towards the guest room, not wanting to be caught. Now that you knew Oliver’s ultimate intentions with you, you felt much more of an urge to get away from the man, an even greater fear of having him near you.
You needed to get away, fast.
Chapter 1:…
Chapter 7:…

Short chapter is short! :iconwhyplz:

I think it's important to keep it the way it is though. It'll make it easier to write the next two chapters for this story. :iconyayitalyplz:

Thanks for reading! :)
Add a Comment:
KatieRosprim Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Part 7?
Coolpignog Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Prease continue 

pokemonpirate7 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
I sharr do what I can to furfirr your wish. :iconbowplz:
Coolpignog Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Purestrongpoem Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Good chapter.
pokemonpirate7 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013
Thank you. :)
Purestrongpoem Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem.
xXFreaky-SunXx Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013
Nice chapter, even if it's a little short. Short can be good, too. And there is more to come, so it's fine.
Well done. :)
I'm looking forward to the next time. Keep up the good work. :)
pokemonpirate7 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013
Thanks! :D
FandomQueen13 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I loved this chapter!!!!!  :iconfoxyayzplz:  simple WONDERFUL!!!!! I know from the start that he was planning on killing me but onion head "shock" OMG! Can't wait until the next chapter BOTHER SNAPE XD 
pokemonpirate7 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
Lol :D Stop bothering me! :iconwizardangstplz:

Seriously though, I'm glad you like it. :) And I'll get working on the next part soon... probably. 

:iconpokemonpirate7: :icondotdotdotplz: Yes... Soon... /shot
Chao-Hero Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
>v< I love it oh-so much!
pokemonpirate7 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
Thank you. :) I'm so happy to hear that. :iconhappyitalyplz:
MadHattress77 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconyay2penglandplz:Yay! It's finally out:iconfuckyeahamericaplz:
(I agree, thought, it was rather short:(... But awesome!!!:D)
As always I want:iconmoarplz::iconnaoplz:(And if not now, as fast as possible, poppet:icon2penglandwantsplz:)
pokemonpirate7 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
I'll be working on it. :D I've gotten more inspired to write recently, so hopefully updates will be pretty consistent for a while, but we'll see. :)
DarkEcila Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Ollie dear wants to kill me! damn and i was having fun. :( more please :)
pokemonpirate7 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
:) I'll get working on it.
Add a Comment:

:iconpokemonpirate7: More from pokemonpirate7

Featured in Collections

Fics Lit. by MioMochi

Hetalia by yashacat

Literature by DemonOfMist97

More from DeviantArt


Submitted on
August 19, 2013
File Size
3.4 KB


52 (who?)